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Portraits Poetry Series #70: The Absence of Relevance

In case you haven’t been here before, I love writing prompts – whether a list of words, one word, or even an image. With these posts, I have written poems specifically about paintings and I hope, with my words, you see the scene just as visibly in your heart and mind as if you had seen the image itself.



The young child
Drew her coat closer
To shield against the cold
Fingers numb and aching
She moved slowly
Through the boulevards
To stay warm.
The sky was grey then
And everything
Was covered in white
Dusted on rooftops
And piled on the sidewalks.
It slushed beneath her feet
Barely clad in shoes
Too small for her feet
And she shivered in the cold
But she was used to its chill.
No matter her situation,
She looked at the scene
With promise
Her eyes filled with wonder
Her heart filled with hope
This is true beauty
Her heart whispered
And she listened intently
She heard the children
Playing in the streets
Their voices singing out
In laughter
She heard the dull metal drag
Of shovels
Clearing the sidewalks
It was a story
Unfolding before her eyes
And one, while unknown to her
Filled her dreams –
The thought of belonging
Where you stand
And the promise
Of warmth near the fire
After enjoying the cold
The enjoyment
Of family and friends
The certainty
Of where you lay your head
This was what she hoped for
Not toys –
Not luxury –
But connection.
She held her coat
Close to her throat
In hopes to shield herself
From the cold –
Not from the airy wind
Or the new fallen snow
But the absence of relevance.

© Sumyanna 2016


Writer of poetry and seeker of knowledge. I hope to inspire and be inspired by my words and the world around me.

9 thoughts on “Portraits Poetry Series #70: The Absence of Relevance

  1. This is so amazingly written! Followed 🙂
    I’m just starting out in poetry and it would be amazing if you could give my page a follow too 🙂
    (only if you like my stuff of course!)


    1. Thank you so very much. I have finally gotten a chance to see your page and love your upbeat attitude and motivation. It is a breath of fresh air!


    1. Thank you so much for the kind words! That is exactly what I was hoping to do when I started writing the Portraits Poems. I haven’t written any in a while now… but am hoping to return with better imagery.

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