What is it, exactly
They just can’t see?
For when they look –
They look through me
Beyond me
And around me.
Are they afraid to trace
The gentle curve of my smile?
To see in the depths of my eyes?
What are they afraid
They’ll see?
A reflection of themselves…
Perhaps their worn expression,
Or their disappointed faces –
That the façade peels
It cracks and fades
And betrays
Their carefully painted canvas
Where intimacy is lacking
And they seek
Neither to know themselves
Nor the world around them,
Their sole desire – to swiftly
Ride into that sunset
Like eager, perfect-smiling showmen
Look at me
Look at what I have amassed
Look at what I’ve accomplished
And for all the shortage of clout
In hold in my two hands,
I looked at everyone
With unabashed eyes
Seeking their distinctive smile
Hoping for
The veracity in their song.
I struggled alone
Through the weight of my days
Under the crippling expectation
Of a counterfeit smile
I was real
I was real
I was me.
© Sumyanna 2018
Gorgeous image courtesy of Pixabay.com
Hi sumyanna hope u are well .
P.S. my domain name is changed to theseesawstories.wordpress.com
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Thank you. I am following you there, but have been incredibly busy this year. I am just now starting to get back to blogging and hope to read more of you 🙂
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Hey dear nice to hear from you after a long time . Hope to see you soon with some write ups xxx hope you having a good year there
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Yes, I have been gone quite a while and I miss everyone horribly 🙂 Things are calming down here so that is a blessing. I wish the same for you as well.
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Hmmm shall keep you in prayers and thoughts .. n thank you so much:))
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Thank you 🙂
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So beautifully expressed, Sumyanna. 🙂
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Thank you so very much.
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This is really moving and passionate. I loved each word! 🙂
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Thank you very much!
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My pleasure 🙂
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Hi Sumyanna, wonderful peace, showing you at your greatest depth and individuality. I can’t imagine anyone being able to not see the depth and wonder of you, though I think all to many people rush around with eyes open, but not able to see or understand. Great poem. Best wishes and blessings, Charles.
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Oh, it has happened so many times I have stopped counting. It is sad, but I think we all have our own individual struggles. I am blessed that my husband and my children know. To me, that is more than enough 🙂 I have missed you – I’ve been away working hard on getting the kids ready for the real world. My oldest is going to college next year and it has taken a lot of work to sign her up for scholarships and visit colleges. I am slowly making my way back – it has taken a lot of scheduling and organization on my part, but I am not giving up on hope.
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thanks for this reply, I havew not been very active myself, I just seem so tired, as this year rushes by. (it seems like just a few days ago thatthe shops were full of decorations and horriid Christmas jingles, and now here we are again! I have posted less and less as the year progressed, and my wife Genevieve’s health got worse and worse. Things are slowly looking up, and my Serbian friend Helena Santic Isakov, who poetry I helped to translate into English, has found a publisher for these works.She chose 30 of my poems and translated them into Serbian, so the one half of the book will have the both the poem and its translation together on facing pages, with some art work as well. i also had my first poem published in a magazine in South Africa come out, so things are moving forward. I did not realise that your daughter was old enough to go to college, what an adventure she is about to undertake. I hope she enjoys it and grows into the path that she has chosen. Great to hear from you again, I have also missed you a lot. Best wishes and blessings, Charles.
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Powerful poem!
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I can relate somewhat. But I eventually ended up disregardimg the world – or so I like to think – because they disregarded me.
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Wherever you go, be who you Are!!
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I am still here, I promise 🙂 Things have been incredibly busy and I do hope to touch on that in a post this week. I just have to balance my time, so I only had time today to post a poem. It is good to finally be back though. I have missed you both!
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… and a lovely “you” you must be! Such a nice poem!
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So incredibly sweet. I thank you 🙂
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Awesome
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Very nice poem!
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Thank you very much!
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Your very welcome
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Great poem 🌹
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Beautiful!
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Thank you very much sweet lady 🙂 Hope you are having a lovely day.
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I am. Everyone is away on holidays, I don’t have to be up at 5 to midnight, no cooking for anyone but me so I’m chillaxing woot
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